Criterion A: 4
I scored myself a 4, because I did show knowledge that I read the book. I didn't score higher, because I'm not sure if I referenced the text well enough to support my knowledge of the book.
Criterion B: 4
I scored myself a 4, because I show awareness of literary features (comparison and listing), but I feel like it's not as adequate as it could be. I could've done more with the features I chose to analyze.
Criterion C: 3
I scored myself a 3, because the organization is okay. I state my two questions and then look at them one by one. Everything is pretty straightforward. The reason it's not higher is because I feel like my conclusion could have been brought out better.
Criterion D: 3
I scored myself a 3, because the language I used was just bad. I stuttered a lot and said "um" very frequently. I'm pretty sure I mispronounced a lot of things and I'm sorry.
Total: 14
I need help.
My passage:
